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©2002-2009 ~lucky13gothgirl
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true title: Shattered Glass.
it was already taken though....
a poem I wrote quite a while ago that I just found about 10 minutes ago....I may end up inking this (I made this with a pencil and paper) and if I do, I'll upload it...
I wasn't having a very good time when I wrote this....

*EDIT 2/17/03*
looking back on this I feel like something is missing..... I just don't know what! if anyone, anyone at all has an idea for what I could do with this PLEASE send me a note. I'll be forever in your debt Hug s to all

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:iconconfuseddave:
wow, i love it

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:iconcorganraven:
:: can't help but feel...strange ::
i wrote a song (instrumental) called shattered glass sometime in the spring. it's really pretty.
the strange thing is that these lyrics fit perfectly to the music... weird.
mucho megusta
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very good! it rymes beautifuly, and really flows. so smooth sounding. very well written
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for anyone that can't completely read that it is as follows:

When time was young I did not fear
But then came a sound I'd longed to hear
I spun to see and tried to grasp
What held a voice like shattered glass
It cut me deep, brought forth new wounds
But sometimes pain knows how to soothe
My wounds would heal, but I'd still know
Memories need not always show
I could fight, so as not to be
But in the end I'd still be me
What searing pain had been brought back
By the voice like shattered glass

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:icondarklyartistic:
wow, very creative approach to the poem! great stuff!

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But sometimes pain knows how to soothe

that is a wickkked line
really nice.
I love the contrast and everything with this... awesome.

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Mary
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This is, simply, amazing...

I won't try to break it apart, as it has different meaning for both of us...so I'll just add it to my favorites and keep it close to mind, instead. i hope you don't object.

Black Rose

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